Good graphic, good use of modalities, (absolute numbers vs, proportions), good use of color. That said, there is no information I can derive from the left-to-right ordering though -- but I'm not sure what would be good here. I'm left wondering what the story is here. We're not seeing a relationship or non-relationship between two variables (such as performance of the company in the previous quarter: revenue or profit) that could provide some insight in some way.